I worked a long time before I was satisfied with this piece. I've never spent so long on a single deviation. However, I'm extremely happy with the outcome of my nitpicking.
It's interesting. The colors make me think Kill Bill, which isn't the greatests thing. I think you should change the colors. yellow and suicide don't really mix. the red and yellow is very harsh, but then so are you edges. its like you did a cut out filter then a roughen. And that "You" in the typo doesnt sit very well with me either. It has a lot of potential though. I hope you rework it.
Thanks very much for your suggestions.
I was actually inspired by the "Kill Bill" artwork to make this.
I had a lot of doubts about the text as well, but I desperately wanted to keep in the "O" with the crosshairs. Maybe I will rework the typo some more, though.
I was actually inspired by the "Kill Bill" artwork to make this.
I had a lot of doubts about the text as well, but I desperately wanted to keep in the "O" with the crosshairs. Maybe I will rework the typo some more, though.
Thanks a lot for your crits.